The Three Men
“That’s how I got here,” the man sitting on the bench said.
“How about you guys?” the shorter of the two men standing replied.
“We were travelling to Canada from China, when we found ourselves here. We don’t know what we’re going to do now, because it seems we have somehow turned into statues.”
Suddenly, a lady walked up to the three men and screamed, “SELFIE!”
“Is this how our lives are going to end?” the man sitting inquired at the two men standing.
“Have we all become statues for the sole purpose of making people happy?”
“Is this how our lives are going to end?” the man sitting inquired at the two men standing.
“Have we all become statues for the sole purpose of making people happy?”
“Making people happy is why I like being a statue”.
In the first sentence, you have replied, but no one said anything before, so replied isn't really the best word choice. I don't think you need all those lines after the s in selfie. Remember to have a new line each time a different character speaks. In the end, who says that, and remember to put punctuation inside quotations.
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