'Looking Back'
The night before, I was sleeping in my bed wearing my orange pyjamas when the boom of thunder and a bright beam made my eyes open. The silence lasted for about a minute. Suddenly, the rain drummed wildly on the roof. My thoughts swam in my head. I couldn’t sleep. The thing that happened last night is still in my head. Tears suddenly started rolling down my cheeks. I realized that I should look towards the future and not look back at the past.
The start you can take out the night before or change it because it sounds a little forced
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